I try not to get into writing questions but I will this time-
Good concepts, poor execution. Poor execution then turns around and turns good concepts into “Who ever thought that this was a good idea!?” Etc.
Not just poor execution, but poor integration as well.
I’m not going to get into it deep with examples or anything- I find writing more subjective than art. If you fuck up drawing a hand, you fuck up drawing a hand. If you fuck up writing in a character’s extended family, well.
I’m probably going to have to do a bulk mail reply soon.